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Originally Posted by ChiTak  Fantastic!! Very believable except for being able to fool the CC and the members of the CIC into believing that actual damage had occurred which forced them to abandon the vessel. From my experience on surface naval vessels and other military systems the CC should have been able to tell from his displays and command telltales that a simulation was being run. Now if that was being masked in some way..........
I would definitely like to read the rest of the story. You can send it to mike.spivey@att.net.
Thank You.
Mike Spivey |
Thanks, Mike. Definitely masked/obfuscated, though I did not bother saying. This chapter was mostly told from Colonel Henson's perspective, so if he didn't see it, I did not intend to put it in. Thanks for the kind comment, and you should be seeing something soon in your inbox. If you're willing to slog through it, I'm more than happy to take whatever criticism you have, especially from a fellow Surface Warfare type and SF fan.
V/R,
Tom Mays
LCDR USN