Weird Stargate On A Trail - Scifi-Meshes.com

Cameron Mitchell · 03-13-2008, 09:52 AM

This thread was a screw up, sorry. The model was by RJB. I didn't not know this, and I was new to SFM at the time. I apologize for my ignorance, and will not let this happen again.

**specs2** · 03-13-2008, 11:00 AM

the pov doesn't work at all. this photo looks, like it has been taken from man height, but the gate should be much bigger. it's about 6 meter in diameter, so i'd suggest to fit it that. way.

Nutsy · 03-13-2008, 11:17 AM

Other than what spec said. You really need to work on the lighting of the model. Its close but not right. Also the textures... The puddle looks as if you got it off the show off a low res rip. You should really make your own texture to get a better quality. Also the gate texture is really too plane... You should add detalis. even subtle ones. prehaps add some modeling details as well...

Melak · 03-13-2008, 02:46 PM

I saw the same picture of a gate here on scifi meshes. If you look through a couple of the stargate threads you'll probably find the author.

As I understand it, you composed the images together? Maybe it should be posted in the 2D gallery if so

Cameron Mitchell · 03-13-2008, 10:52 PM

Like I said, it's my first try, but thanks for the constructive criticism

peragrin · 03-14-2008, 09:45 PM

The gate is a model by RJB. you should talk to him about it. Other than that it is too close for a gate. The image and gate don't scale right.

**IRML** · 03-14-2008, 11:58 PM

you need to update the credits and make sure you attach the image to the first post

Cameron Mitchell · 03-15-2008, 12:25 AM

Is RJB the name of the user here, or is it an abbreviation?

Ace · 03-15-2008, 03:32 AM

If the gate itself was white, with the blue lights as-is, it'd look like an Ori gate design

Dr Lee · 03-15-2008, 03:47 AM

RJB is a username here. I thought i recognized that gate as his.

....

Looking at that image you've just cut and pasted one of his renders into the original photos.

not cool man

03-13-2008, 10:52 PM	#5 (permalink)
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03-14-2008, 11:58 PM	#7 (permalink)
IRML GRRRRR!!!! Join Date: May 2006 Location: London Posts: 2,553	you need to update the credits and make sure you attach the image to the first post
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03-15-2008, 12:25 AM	#8 (permalink)
Cameron Mitchell SFM Guru Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: VisUban Posts: 377 Blog Entries: 5	Is RJB the name of the user here, or is it an abbreviation?
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03-15-2008, 03:32 AM	#9 (permalink)
Ace SFM Nugget Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 57	If the gate itself was white, with the blue lights as-is, it'd look like an Ori gate design
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03-15-2008, 03:47 AM	#10 (permalink)
Dr Lee SFM Guru Realname: Rob Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Aboard the Churchill Age: 24 Posts: 841	RJB is a username here. I thought i recognized that gate as his. .... Looking at that image you've just cut and pasted one of his renders into the original photos. not cool man
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03-13-2008, 11:00 AM	#2 (permalink)
specs2 Organic Mass Realname: Kido Join Date: May 2006 Location: Berlin, Germany Age: 26 Posts: 1,088 Blog Entries: 1	the pov doesn't work at all. this photo looks, like it has been taken from man height, but the gate should be much bigger. it's about 6 meter in diameter, so i'd suggest to fit it that. way.

03-13-2008, 11:17 AM	#3 (permalink)
Nutsy SFM Obsessed Realname: Simon Join Date: May 2006 Location: Never Never Ever Forever Land Age: 26 Posts: 1,299	Other than what spec said. You really need to work on the lighting of the model. Its close but not right. Also the textures... The puddle looks as if you got it off the show off a low res rip. You should really make your own texture to get a better quality. Also the gate texture is really too plane... You should add detalis. even subtle ones. prehaps add some modeling details as well...

03-13-2008, 02:46 PM	#4 (permalink)
Melak SFM Obsessed Total Awards: 1 (more» ...) Realname: Leon Join Date: May 2006 Location: Berlin Age: 18 Posts: 1,235	I saw the same picture of a gate here on scifi meshes. If you look through a couple of the stargate threads you'll probably find the author. As I understand it, you composed the images together? Maybe it should be posted in the 2D gallery if so

03-14-2008, 09:45 PM	#6 (permalink)
peragrin SFM Nugget Realname: David Turnbull Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 44	The gate is a model by RJB. you should talk to him about it. Other than that it is too close for a gate. The image and gate don't scale right.

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