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05-29-2008, 11:12 PM
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| SFM Nugget Join Date: May 2006 Age: 28
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Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0 | the Wreckage I was inspired by the latest "Planet of the Apes" movie, when I draw this. It's just the remains of a huge ship, which crashlanded thousands of jears ago in the desert and gave birth to a small Oasis in its shadow. Just tell me what you think of it and perhaps give some tips of how to refine it  |
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05-31-2008, 11:04 PM
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| Still Alive   Realname: Andy Join Date: May 2006 Location: Syracuse NY USA Age: 24
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Downloads: 3 Uploads: 4     | your shadows should be in the foreground considering where the sun is . . . right now it looks like the wreckage is floating over the desert also try using some textures in your brushes, and use ones with hard edges and you could also benefit from some depth of field (distant objects become lighter and less saturated . . . think atmosphere haze) |
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06-12-2008, 03:47 AM
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| SFM Guru  Join Date: May 2006 Age: 32
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Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0 | Nice. Could be a wreckage of an NX-Class ship (or any other, for that matter.) The site of an ambush, like the 47's beacon... |
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