V Invasion WIP - Scifi-Meshes.com

CaptSparrow · 05-17-2008, 05:24 AM

Here is an image I'm editing, adding CG models to, and changing signs, so I suppose the 2D WIP would be best. The main reason I posted this here was to get critiqued on the composition, lighting, and aesthetics to make sure everything feels and looks rights.

VTheReturn.jpg

This is being done in Photoshop CS2 and renderings from Bryce.
Models by Axeman3d (Mothership) and Master_Chikan (Shuttle)

**TheGreatRaja** · 05-17-2008, 06:44 PM

a) the mother ships is way to small .... or at last the details make it look that way.
b) the clouds just horrible .... I mean you can tell they are PS clouds

firstangel · 05-19-2008, 03:24 PM

the ship is suppose to be five miles wide try sticking it over a city skyline and make it look that huge and give it a more metallic advanced look make it look like a weapon of war.

ydma1796 · 05-19-2008, 04:58 PM

I'm sorry who is the creator of the shuttle's... Master_Chikan? Is this a joke?... Master Molester? Sorry I know it's not you... that's just in bad taste.

Back on topic,

I like the concept but it does look dwarved by the setting, I like FirstAngel's idea use a large cityscape to show better scale

05-17-2008, 05:24 AM	#1 (permalink)
CaptSparrow SFM Nugget Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 29	V Invasion WIP Here is an image I'm editing, adding CG models to, and changing signs, so I suppose the 2D WIP would be best. The main reason I posted this here was to get critiqued on the composition, lighting, and aesthetics to make sure everything feels and looks rights. VTheReturn.jpg This is being done in Photoshop CS2 and renderings from Bryce. Models by Axeman3d (Mothership) and Master_Chikan (Shuttle)
CaptSparrow SFM Nugget Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 29	Avoid using cliches.... Think outside the box!

05-17-2008, 06:44 PM	#2 (permalink)
TheGreatRaja SFM Fanfilm Attack Dog Join Date: May 2006 Location: On your Computer.. Looking at your Porn! Age: 44 Posts: 1,383	a) the mother ships is way to small .... or at last the details make it look that way. b) the clouds just horrible .... I mean you can tell they are PS clouds
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05-19-2008, 03:24 PM	#3 (permalink)
firstangel SFM Nugget Realname: ze Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 28	the ship is suppose to be five miles wide try sticking it over a city skyline and make it look that huge and give it a more metallic advanced look make it look like a weapon of war.

05-19-2008, 04:58 PM	#4 (permalink)
ydma1796 SFM Nugget Realname: Kevin P. Jr. Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Freehold, New Jersey Age: 38 Posts: 82	I'm sorry who is the creator of the shuttle's... Master_Chikan? Is this a joke?... Master Molester? Sorry I know it's not you... that's just in bad taste. Back on topic, I like the concept but it does look dwarved by the setting, I like FirstAngel's idea use a large cityscape to show better scale

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