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**docprice** · 06-13-2008, 12:15 AM

This is my drawing that I did today. Its bland and weak and im at a point where im stuck. Inspiration was BSG, Macross, and Starwars. This is just a doodle and I did sign it. If any one wants to take it and go with it by all means go for it..

**Tovette** · 06-13-2008, 12:31 AM

You have a good basic shape going docprice. I think if you cut away pieces to make the shape more interesting you'd find your inspiration hidden inside. I get stuck too when I am painting or drawing. Sometimes walking away and coming back later helps me see my work with a refreshed perspective, while other times just continuing to plug away at it helps me 'break' through that barrier of creativity. Good job and I hope to see more art from you

PQ · 06-15-2008, 11:41 AM

I think you have an interesting start there. I really like the front so far and I could imagine the bridge in the middle part of it. I'd like to see a more detailed version maybe with a few cuts like Tovette said.

**docprice** · 06-25-2008, 12:58 PM

edit: Its not letting me upload images at this time. will fix once this problem has been corrected.

V Fixed.

**docprice** · 06-26-2008, 01:28 PM

Even though I dont like it, here is an update.

PQ · 06-26-2008, 05:55 PM

I like the way you're going with the front but it still feels kind of blocky but maybe I just need to see it with more details.
I just noticed here's something not quite right with the rear section. it feels twisted but good improvements with the mid section. Keep going.

**docprice** · 06-27-2008, 03:16 PM

your right about the rear section. that part is already in the trash, I just threw somehting together to give alittle balance while i was drawing.

**docprice** · 06-28-2008, 12:19 AM

Here is an Update, Played around with a different front end. I am more happy with aft section than the others in the past.

PQ · 06-28-2008, 10:58 AM

It sure has come a long way. The first post looked more like a freighter, more bulky but this last one seems like a sleek kind of interceptor cruiser. I think you can do more designs evolving from your first post. Heavy freighter, battleship, fighter... I'd like to see a fleet of yours.

**docprice** · 06-29-2008, 12:21 AM

The first post was my first drawing, the other ones are subsequent evolments from the first one.

06-13-2008, 12:31 AM	#2 (permalink)
Tovette www.projectcosmos.net Total Awards: 1 (more» ...) Realname: Nate Join Date: May 2006 Location: San Diego, CA, USA Age: 31 Posts: 5,478	You have a good basic shape going docprice. I think if you cut away pieces to make the shape more interesting you'd find your inspiration hidden inside. I get stuck too when I am painting or drawing. Sometimes walking away and coming back later helps me see my work with a refreshed perspective, while other times just continuing to plug away at it helps me 'break' through that barrier of creativity. Good job and I hope to see more art from you
	www.projectcosmos.net - Tomorrow begins here.

06-15-2008, 11:41 AM	#3 (permalink)
PQ SFM Nugget Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 62	I think you have an interesting start there. I really like the front so far and I could imagine the bridge in the middle part of it. I'd like to see a more detailed version maybe with a few cuts like Tovette said.
PQ SFM Nugget Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 62

06-25-2008, 12:58 PM	#4 (permalink)
docprice The local peanut gallery Realname: Rick Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Joshua Tree Ca. Age: 28 Posts: 636	edit: Its not letting me upload images at this time. will fix once this problem has been corrected. V Fixed.
	Last edited by docprice; 06-26-2008 at 01:29 PM.

06-26-2008, 05:55 PM	#6 (permalink)
PQ SFM Nugget Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 62	I like the way you're going with the front but it still feels kind of blocky but maybe I just need to see it with more details. I just noticed here's something not quite right with the rear section. it feels twisted but good improvements with the mid section. Keep going.
PQ SFM Nugget Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 62

06-28-2008, 10:58 AM	#9 (permalink)
PQ SFM Nugget Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 62	It sure has come a long way. The first post looked more like a freighter, more bulky but this last one seems like a sleek kind of interceptor cruiser. I think you can do more designs evolving from your first post. Heavy freighter, battleship, fighter... I'd like to see a fleet of yours.
PQ SFM Nugget Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 62

06-27-2008, 03:16 PM	#7 (permalink)
docprice The local peanut gallery Realname: Rick Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Joshua Tree Ca. Age: 28 Posts: 636	your right about the rear section. that part is already in the trash, I just threw somehting together to give alittle balance while i was drawing.

06-29-2008, 12:21 AM	#10 (permalink)
docprice The local peanut gallery Realname: Rick Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Joshua Tree Ca. Age: 28 Posts: 636	The first post was my first drawing, the other ones are subsequent evolments from the first one.

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