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Old 06-03-2008, 02:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
Sanderlee
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Apart from too much reflectivity on the surface of the saucer (esp. near the bridge section) I think this is a fine "first go." There are always things that can be touched up, and as you say, the Ambassador's a WIP (esp. around the edge of the saucer section).

Other more qualified minds will give more specific critiques, I am sure. But, for not, tone down on the mirrored surfaces.

Damn it, Jim, it's a starship not a looking glass!


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