| Thanks all! It's really encouraging to get feedback.
@ Major Diarrhia
My crap spelling strikes again! It's supposed to be 'hangar' not 'hanger' and the 'single UL-99' it mentions is a small, manned utility craft that acts much like a ships helicopter today. Part of what I wanted to do with this was go with the conceit that is it is written in that time period, a lot of terms and references to ships or places would be familiar to the reader. Confusing now I know, but hopefully things will get easier as it project fleshes out.
And I'm really looking forward to seeing your work Liam! I'll have something put together for you by monday at the latest.
Zach |