USS Hawking in low orbit - Scifi-Meshes.com

**Lonewriter** · 05-07-2008, 07:04 PM

Here is a quick render of the Hawking. I didn't do any lighting changes because of a slow PC. I just wanted to show the girl off. Enjoy.

Lord_Trekie · 05-07-2008, 08:27 PM

It still looks great.

Starship · 05-07-2008, 09:50 PM

The girl is a beauty.

About the rendering, don´t get me wrong, but... don´t appears a low orbit flight, since the background don´t give you the depth feeling. The shadow is to much dense too. Appears to be a "mini" nova in a flight next to the floor, not over atmosphere.

Maybe you must add the horizon to the view, just where the planet silhoutte encounters the space.
Hope this makes sense.

**Lonewriter** · 05-07-2008, 10:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Starship

The girl is a beauty.

About the rendering, don´t get me wrong, but... don´t appears a low orbit flight, since the background don´t give you the depth feeling. The shadow is to much dense too. Appears to be a "mini" nova in a flight next to the floor, not over atmosphere.

Maybe you must add the horizon to the view, just where the planet silhoutte encounters the space.
Hope this makes sense.

yea it does, the next render I do has a much better background, this was just the first thing I saw on my hard drive. I'll also be using more lighting in the next image.

biotech · 05-08-2008, 05:09 AM

The background is nice, but the black shape directly under the ship makes it look like a shadow, with the ship sitting on the ground.

**Lonewriter** · 05-08-2008, 06:06 AM

I don't really like the background in this shot now that I look at it again. My next one is going to be alot better. I'll do it tomorrow.

**Lonewriter** · 05-09-2008, 03:30 AM

here is the new one, I think it's better.

Lord_Trekie · 05-09-2008, 04:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lonewriter

here is the new one, I think it's better.

Gotta agree, looks better.

**Lonewriter** · 05-09-2008, 04:37 AM

I'll be so glad when I get my new pc in, I'll be ordering it tomorrow. Then I can make some much better renders.

biotech · 05-09-2008, 04:39 AM

That one is a lot better.

05-07-2008, 09:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
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biotech SFM Oracle Realname: Rich Join Date: May 2006 Location: Hull, Yorkshire, England Age: 38 Posts: 3,366 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	The background is nice, but the black shape directly under the ship makes it look like a shadow, with the ship sitting on the ground.
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Lonewriter SFM Obsessed Join Date: May 2006 Age: 38 Posts: 1,524 Downloads: 35 Uploads: 0	I don't really like the background in this shot now that I look at it again. My next one is going to be alot better. I'll do it tomorrow.
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05-09-2008, 04:37 AM	#9 (permalink)
Lonewriter SFM Obsessed Join Date: May 2006 Age: 38 Posts: 1,524 Downloads: 35 Uploads: 0	I'll be so glad when I get my new pc in, I'll be ordering it tomorrow. Then I can make some much better renders.
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05-09-2008, 04:39 AM	#10 (permalink)
biotech SFM Oracle Realname: Rich Join Date: May 2006 Location: Hull, Yorkshire, England Age: 38 Posts: 3,366 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	That one is a lot better.
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05-07-2008, 08:27 PM	#2 (permalink)
Lord_Trekie SFM Nugget Realname: Matt Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Washington State Age: 20 Posts: 148 Downloads: 5 Uploads: 0	It still looks great.

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