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Mong0ose · 03-19-2007, 08:08 PM

decided to come back to this 4 a while, shelfed the APU for the time being

c&c welcome

**Coolhand** · 03-19-2007, 09:00 PM

why is he so out of proportion? his legs and lower torso look way too small compared to his head and arms giving him ape-like proportions.

-=sAs=- · 03-19-2007, 09:29 PM

Nice work! great style....

SCLRSIGS · 03-19-2007, 11:24 PM

Very good. Pseudo-samurai style is attractive. Not sure about the feet. Makes him look a little clumsy.

**smallworld** · 03-19-2007, 11:46 PM

Great modelling and concept, I really like the whole look.

Dallidas · 03-19-2007, 11:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coolhand

why is he so out of proportion? his legs and lower torso look way too small compared to his head and arms giving him ape-like proportions.

just put a jar over its head and say thats the only part of the body it needs

Walkyrje · 03-20-2007, 12:35 AM

I agree that your Lorica Segmentata is nicely modeled, but the legs... first of all, other than the armor plates, they seem very spindly for moving the mass of an armored man around. Secondly, as others have pointed out, they seem out of proportion. Why did you decide to give him more human-esque arms than the original draft?

Mong0ose · 03-22-2007, 10:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coolhand

why is he so out of proportion? his legs and lower torso look way too small compared to his head and arms giving him ape-like proportions.

Thanks for being so honest! Nothin like constructuve criticism....

On a serious note to answer Walkyrje's points, i agree the legs do look quite spindly and i will beef them up, as for the feet i wanted to give him a robust platform to stand on, i am part way through modelling a huge gun for him so it will hopefully make sense then, but i agree they dont look great so i'll see what i can do

As for his arms, this was the result of two factors, one they were pretty high poly so render times when i animate would be huge and two, it's easier to skin & manipulate human arms than rig a mechanical arm like that

Thanks for all the feedback guys, appreciated

Mong0ose · 03-28-2007, 08:04 PM

some updates, working on a short animation, heres a still and a movie in divx format

cheers

**Ramiel** · 03-29-2007, 12:22 AM

I love it so far (remember to do custom texture for it once finished, these, are -in some places- too big for it)

Keep it up!

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03-19-2007, 09:29 PM	#13 (permalink)
-=sAs=- SFM Nugget Realname: Ferenc Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Earth/EU/hungary/nagytarcsa Age: 23 Posts: 130	Nice work! great style....

03-19-2007, 11:24 PM	#14 (permalink)
SCLRSIGS SFM Nugget Realname: Sean Join Date: May 2006 Age: 32 Posts: 64	Very good. Pseudo-samurai style is attractive. Not sure about the feet. Makes him look a little clumsy.

03-19-2007, 11:46 PM	#15 (permalink)
smallworld SFM Guru Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Ireland Age: 38 Posts: 209	Great modelling and concept, I really like the whole look.

03-20-2007, 12:35 AM	#17 (permalink)
Walkyrje SFM Nugget Realname: Jenny Linsky Join Date: May 2006 Location: Arizona Age: 30 Posts: 144	I agree that your Lorica Segmentata is nicely modeled, but the legs... first of all, other than the armor plates, they seem very spindly for moving the mass of an armored man around. Secondly, as others have pointed out, they seem out of proportion. Why did you decide to give him more human-esque arms than the original draft?

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