Modified Star Fighter

[Berkut]

good work so far, this is shaping up nicely

the cockpit looks a little off to me, its either way too wide, in which case I think working on making it more narrow will really improve the look of the fighter, and make it easier to understand, or if the fighter is very small the cockpit isn't nowhere near high enough

[star_creations]

Looking at it further, you may be right. Might make is more narrow.
it has been alonnnnng time since I created a fighter.

Originally Posted by Berkut

good work so far, this is shaping up nicely

the cockpit looks a little off to me, its either way too wide, in which case I think working on making it more narrow will really improve the look of the fighter, and make it easier to understand, or if the fighter is very small the cockpit isn't nowhere near high enough

[kborak]

the cockpit is giving me trouble on the fighter that I have started as well.

[star_creations]

I know there is gap between the canopy and the body, just trying to get the size down first.

[kborak]

whar are the dimensions that you have for the cockpit as it ia star?

[star_creations]

i did not know if you wanted me to do the cockpit...I just did the canopy.

You want me to build the cockpit?

[kborak]

lol I meant the canopy. Um but a simple cockpit might be the way to go just simple block shapes that can be textured. We dont need that much detail, the cockpit shots will all be brief and probably wont be to scrutinized

[star_creations]

a low poly cockpit is really easy,,,but will do that after the fighter is done.
Oh can I read some of the story that you written?

[star_creations]

I think this size is perfect...

[kborak]

oh sure thats no prblem at all I will put more of it up either tonight or tomorrow. Im a little busy with moving this weekend so it may be till sunday if thats ok. I love how this is turning out, your making me rethink one or two things. but that is good!