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| | #111 (permalink) |
| SFM Obsessed Join Date: May 2006 Location: Leuven, Belgium Age: 31
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| Hmmm since they're obviously a lot smaller than the main engines you could try moving them further away from the main engines. Also make them longer towards the wing's leading edge, creating a sort of seperate, tapering engine pod merged with the wing, but also softly blended in with the main body. Just a suggestion of course, in the end it's your design. I just feel that it's way to blocky and blunt right now and it's messing the otherwise fluid lines a bit. |
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| | #112 (permalink) |
| SFM Guru Realname: Ryan Wolfe Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: my mind Age: 29
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| i feel what you saying meph but I think that those humps are going to end up being important. Star and myself where going over technologies for the story and some changes have been made that the "humps" may be perfect for. So for now Im leaving them in, but you never know what may happen when writing the story itself. Update started the window, just an idea, going to play with it more still. The cockpit is still going to be accessed from an underside hatch. Put the seat in to give an idea of visibility through the windows. what you guys think? |
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| | #116 (permalink) |
| SFM Guru Realname: Bogdan Join Date: May 2006 Location: Mississauga, Canada Age: 20
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| not necessarily, it does give the pilot a better view in front and below fighter. Good work on the windows. Something bugs me about those canards though, maybe make them wider? or not facing up so much, or a bit of both. Hope that made sense |
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| | #117 (permalink) |
| SFM Obsessed Join Date: May 2006 Location: Leuven, Belgium Age: 31
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| Hmm the partition in the middle isn't doing it for me to be honest. It block the view too much and it doesnt suit the lines of the fighter. I think it would look better with one partition for the back bit as is now but the frotn bit would look better with an extra division, making it three sections. |
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| | #118 (permalink) |
| SFM Guru Realname: Ryan Wolfe Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: my mind Age: 29
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| ok meph you win on one tell me how this looks cause personally I think your right with the three sections on the glass. Also redid the cocpit area I think this one is looking way better. I used the red clow once agian for the obvious reasons. Owe I almost forgot I lowered the canard tips a bit too. I think it helps alot. |
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| | #120 (permalink) |
| SFM Guru Realname: Bogdan Join Date: May 2006 Location: Mississauga, Canada Age: 20
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| good stuff, although I would make the pilot smaller in relation to the fighter. Right now he looks like if you put a helmet on him he'll practically be hitting the ceiling. Also the cockpit looks kinda really small compared to stars fighter, while migs are generally about the same size as western aircraft. |
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