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Old 05-30-2008, 11:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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asteroids or something like it

any suggestions, names or what i should do with it are welcome
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Old 05-30-2008, 11:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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bigger for a start, asteroids needs to be brighter too

I like what you've got going on with the terrain, but at the moment it's not quite right, either your shot is looking into space and you're terrain needs to be much flatter scaled to look correct, or (and this one makes more sense to me) your shot is in the sky/upper atmosphere and you need to blue out the space a bit to make it look correct

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Old 05-30-2008, 11:44 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Looks good, a bit dark though. Either make the image brighter or larger, or people won't see them

edit: ^what he said
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Old 05-31-2008, 11:47 AM   #4 (permalink)
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well thanks for the feed back im using terragen 2 for it and the asteroid glows is just done in photoshop. the previous picture the planet was flater and there was more of a glow in the upper atmosphere but way to many clouds. speaking of clouds would some low leval cumulus look good or not

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i think they would look good. nice start.

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Old 06-01-2008, 01:37 AM   #6 (permalink)
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wierd the pictures wasnt that dark when i uploaded it

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Old 06-02-2008, 03:42 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 06-02-2008, 09:18 PM   #8 (permalink)
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yeah probably what he said ^, if thats the case double clickyour colour palette in PS, and move the eyedroper around the image if you get a exclamation mark in a yellow triangle alter the colour a little bit. Also maybe if you search the net for a pic of a shuttle re-entry of apollo re-entry you could use some blending options to apply them to the asteroids?
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Old 06-03-2008, 04:44 AM   #9 (permalink)
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i had a look around for apollo re-entry and it came up with alot of pictures with a streak flying across the sky (obviously). but i was planing to have the asteroids just intering the atmosphere so its only slightly buring at the front but i dont quite know how to do that in ps

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Old 06-08-2008, 02:36 AM   #10 (permalink)
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ive put the camera a little higher in the atmosphere and added in some clouds
and i had to put into a zip file because its to big to upload.
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