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06-12-2008, 08:26 PM
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| SFM Nugget  Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 21
| Still working on the the proportions. Here is the new engine design with some detail. As Aylaa suggested I'm going to checkout some designs and rattle around a few things but the forward section does look like it needs tweaking. I extended the back a little to make more of an engine "pod", also I will be adding the galactica type armor to a few of the strut sections. Thanks! |
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06-13-2008, 04:26 PM
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| The local peanut gallery   Realname: Rick Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Joshua Tree Ca. Age: 28
Posts: 864
| I think the engine section is comming along nicely. you defently have a slender and elegant shape. quick idea. try spaceing out the engines alittle more. slightly seperated from the main body. Widen the nose section and add some launch and landing sections. you are defently on your way. |
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06-14-2008, 04:38 PM
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| SFM Guru  Join Date: May 2008 Location: Puerto Rico Age: 33
Posts: 247
| Candva thank you for considering my suggestions I'm no pro but since I've had the oportunity of looking at many impresive works I've develop an eye for modeling and your model has lots of potential to become something great the point of my suggestions comes from your current problems on the engines perhaps the ideas and concepts created by tanj and hobbes will help on your efforts ohh and hobbes its working on a battleship too maybe his current ideas for that proyect may help you even more. I hope we get the oportunity to enjoy this nice ship completed in the days ahead great work Candva |
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06-16-2008, 05:02 AM
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| SFM Nugget Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 21
| Suggestions are definately what I am looking for when posting a WIP and I appreciate everybodies envolvment! Here is a little mock-up I did with a redress of the forward section. Did n't have too much time the last couple of days to work but should be able to do some detailing and settle on a more fixed version this week. |
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06-19-2008, 02:13 AM
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| The local peanut gallery Realname: Rick Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Joshua Tree Ca. Age: 28
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| and the potential is starting to reveal its self. I cant put my finger on it but some thing seems out of balance. Nice job thus far you really have come a long way. Ill play around with some sketches and let you know in couple of days. |
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06-19-2008, 11:22 PM
| #18 (permalink) |
| SFM Nugget  Realname: D Join Date: Jun 2006
Posts: 25
| looks good so far, the only major crit I have would be the sharp angles on the engines... If you beveled them maybe 30 degrees deep into the structure, then it would follow in line with the no sharp angles in anything... I mean look at their doors, even their paper. Just my 2 cents with some change lol...  D. |
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06-20-2008, 10:09 PM
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| SFM Nugget Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 21
| Yeah, I had a hard time on the engine design straight out of the gate. Here is a little update. Took some out of the front landing entry and shaved down the "hammerhead". |
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