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Old 06-17-2008, 04:45 AM   #1 (permalink)
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(Turok resembling) planet scene

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Alright, I'm starting "Turok resembling" action story, consisting of 8 photos in total.

Story:
Three technologically advanced races, the Terrans (humans), Koths and Shievens, have formed an alliance,
known as the GTKSA, (The Galactic-Terran-Koth-Shieven-Alliance)

Info:
The Terrans are known for their military knowledge. Primarily their skill in killing, and working as a team. (Think of Halo)

The Koths are the smarter bunch, primarily renowned for their intelligence. Known to have created a different type of math.

The Shievans are the newest induction into the GTKSA. They outweigh and outsize both the Terrans and Koths, growing to appr. 14" and weighing 600-700 pounds. Most of the Terran and Koth population do not trust the new species, yet the Shievans have the technology to pin-point travel to different galaxies. (Called a hyper-drive)

Setting:

The GTKSA locate a planet(think of Jurassic park, or Turok,) where captured Terran and Koth scientists, (imprisoned by rebel shievans) are forced to produce super-killers, cyborg dinosaurs. The GTKSA send in a cell of their own super-soldiers, (Terran SF) to nutrilize the compound, (lab) and get the scientists as well themselves out alive.

Reference:

http://spotlight.iridas.com/200407/pwa_14_big.jpg

It may turn into a webstory, (20-30 photos,) but who knows?

Dinosaur: (Without armor)

Without eyes:
With eyes:


Here's the start of a run-down 'old pirate' vessel, and a dinosaur.

The red lines on the ship are there to represent the 'crude' construction of this vessel. They built the vessel (example: as a cargo ship at this day and age,) and put cargo boxes (holds, if you will) into the ship, then fastened then down with metal clamps, which are displayed in red. (Just to give an idea about how crude, and barbaric humans are. (Not too intelligent, it seems.)

More to come, please check back for more models (WIPs) for this upcoming project.

(Hopefully this is in the right section, but don't know where it would better fit.)
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File Type: jpg ship2.jpg (171.3 KB, 0 views)
File Type: jpg ship3.jpg (196.8 KB, 0 views)
File Type: jpg ship4.jpg (200.1 KB, 0 views)
File Type: jpg ship5.jpg (210.9 KB, 1 views)

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Old 06-18-2008, 05:29 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Dinosaur Armor

So I've started the armor for the dinosaurs. This is not the finished product, but the spikes on the legs seem...out of place. I won't be removing any spikes, since I need to add to the 'deadly', 'killer' look when I present the project, but am willing to lengthen, shorten, or alter them in some other way.

Just some photos to show how its coming along.
Head detail

Body detail

Tail detail

Top view

Poly count


Would love to hear from you guys. Anything look out of place? Any comments, suggestions? Feel free to constructively criticize my work!

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Old 06-18-2008, 05:33 AM   #3 (permalink)
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interesting project, pretty good start but something is weird about the dinosaur himself, for some reason he doesn't look....erm...hostile? I think to make him look scarier you need to close the eyes about half way and add teeth. Also the nostrils look too big.
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Old 06-18-2008, 05:34 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Alright. I'm going to bed in a few, will pick this up first things first tomorrow.
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Old 06-18-2008, 07:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Update: Edited the first post, and tidied the whole thread up a little. Working on the dinosaur, then moving to detail some more on the ship.
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you may want to correct the dinos musculature before doing the armor...
this is a jumper-runner, he needs powerfull tights (upper leg)
the arms dont seem to come from an omoplate
its clearly a carnivore and it needs to hunt his food -> maybe a more developed thoracic cage (bigger lungs) and a smaller stomac-intestins region (big bellies are for vegetarians. living beeings proceed meat faster than vegetables -> less space to assimilate daily food)

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Old 06-18-2008, 07:47 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Aye, i guess I missed a whole lot of detail on him. Thanks for the heads up, will put that on my list "to do things."
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Old 06-19-2008, 02:51 AM   #8 (permalink)
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(Maybe not an appropriate bump XD) but I changed the ship photo's into thumbnails for better load times.

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