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kraven505 · 07-30-2008, 09:18 PM

Hello, this is my first model Please comment.
quater

Front

body

shoe

Pants

Genex-X1 · 07-30-2008, 09:26 PM

Thats impressive for your first mesh, You've managed to model human anatomy as far as I can see its a very clean mesh, What program are you using?

kraven505 · 07-30-2008, 09:30 PM

Thanks, I'm using Maya 8.5

L2K · 07-30-2008, 09:30 PM

really nice start.
now im feeling nostalgic... remembers me my homeworks at school.

so heres the crits:
wrist and hands could be thicker.
you'll learn the relax tool to smooth your lines.
check out your proportions. arm/shoulders seem strange.

kraven505 · 07-30-2008, 09:59 PM

Thanks for the crits! Yeah I am thinking of just remodel the hand and wirst becuase i saw that they where a little to thin for the model and the hand needs volume in it.

unfathomable · 07-31-2008, 12:43 AM

Thats really good for your first model.
Very clean.
Can't wait to see more!
Nice Job!

07-30-2008, 09:18 PM	#1 (permalink)
kraven505 SFM Nugget Realname: Jessica Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 4	First Model CCM261 Hello, this is my first model Please comment. quater Front body shoe Pants

07-30-2008, 09:26 PM	#2 (permalink)
Genex-X1 SFM Guru Realname: Alexander Join Date: May 2007 Location: Same place as your keys and the remote Age: 19 Posts: 527	Thats impressive for your first mesh, You've managed to model human anatomy as far as I can see its a very clean mesh, What program are you using?
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07-30-2008, 09:30 PM	#4 (permalink)
L2K SFM Guru Total Awards: 2 (more» ...) Realname: El Lu Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Santiago - Chile Age: 25 Posts: 674	really nice start. now im feeling nostalgic... remembers me my homeworks at school. so heres the crits: wrist and hands could be thicker. you'll learn the relax tool to smooth your lines. check out your proportions. arm/shoulders seem strange.
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07-30-2008, 09:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
kraven505 SFM Nugget Realname: Jessica Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 4	Thanks, I'm using Maya 8.5

07-30-2008, 09:59 PM	#5 (permalink)
kraven505 SFM Nugget Realname: Jessica Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 4	Thanks for the crits! Yeah I am thinking of just remodel the hand and wirst becuase i saw that they where a little to thin for the model and the hand needs volume in it.

07-31-2008, 12:43 AM	#6 (permalink)
unfathomable SFM Nugget Realname: kristine Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 1	Thats really good for your first model. Very clean. Can't wait to see more! Nice Job!

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