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Old 07-29-2006, 09:42 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Two suggestions:

1.) The ties don't appear to be making a graceful arc, rather they're making a sharp turn to the right. I'd recommend smoothing that out a little. (assuming that's not an artifact of the preview..)

2.) I'd have them go a little farther into the foreground. The A-Wing appears to be flying along-side the Rebel cruiser, making it look a lot bigger than it really is. (or maybe I'm just not getting the scale of it. I seem to recall the ships being smaller in comparison from RotJ.)

Looks great, tho.

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