The First Child - Completed

[JRL3001]

Ok, so I know this wasnt up in the WIP section for long, but I had/wanted to get this done fast. I have to say I am really happy with how this came out!

Medium is ink on white paper and photoshop. In total about...10 hours work from start to finish. I hope you guys enjoy.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b360/JRL3001/Ayanami_Rei_finished.jpg

[JRL3001]

. . . guess no one wants to comment?

*crickets chirping...*

[chrono]

Not many people on this STAR TREK FORUM are really into anime characters. Anime ships kinda, but not much on the character front.

I think that it's "ok" for a 2 hour piece, but there is a good bit of fixing that needs done that is better left for a newer version.

- The head is angled and slightly misplaced on the neck.

- The facial features aren't where they really should be.

- The front upper arm is elongated and cylinder in shape.

- The foreground hand is mis-aligned with the forearm.

- Also the hand isn't posed well. Flex your hand with your palm pointed at your face.

- The area between the crotch and ribcage should be something of a curve because the backs angle is forcing the internals forward.

- The foreground thigh is thinner than the backs.

IMO, the pose has potential but the current one is stiff and painful when it should be strong and in command, but sensual in movement. I'd suggest that you have a lady friend do some posing for you as real models give you a great sense of what's going on.

As fan art it's good. I've seen far, far worse. :)

[Nodyme]

apart from the technical aspects chrono mentioned already, I got some concerning the motive:
As for the face, it looks more like Shinji Ikari than Rei Ayanami.
the pupils could be more round and need a little touch of brown, they're too red.
and the breasts are too big and the rear too small ^^

other than that a pretty good drawing.

[Kadaeux]

I was expecting some funny bugger to be posting a photo of their newborn! (Seeing as the WIP shots would be NSFW)