The start to a film that doesn't exist

[Luma]

I was bored the other-day (as you are when you create weird things) and decided to create the intro to an "epic" space film that unfortunately doesn't exist!

Tools:
- Photoshop
- Cinema 4D
- Sony Vegas

>> YouTube Link << (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9aCmVkefDEs)

[IRML]

nice, a few things don't feel theatrical enough at the moment though, I think it's the speed mainly, it's just slightly fast, I think the text should be fading in and out a tiny bit slower, and I recommend a fade to black starting from about 38 seconds to the end, which would finish it off better, (I think the fade-in is fine though)

if the entire motion was a bit slower it might match up better with the music

[IRML]

btw probably better off you ask this to be moved to the WIP section (or the gallery if you've finished with it) - you'll get more comments that way

[Luma]

Thanks for the feedback! Although this was an experiment nothing more, but I'll make those changes see how they look.