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Startrek91481 · 11-10-2006, 10:37 AM

cool. I was not certain on the country but I thought it was probably the US. Any particular format you want size you want?

**nhall** · 11-10-2006, 10:47 AM

hmm. the format and size you posted will be fine. All I need is something to show the shopowner, who will then scan it into his machine, turning it into an embroidered patch or embroidering it directly onto my hat.

Which, if you PM me some info, I can probably send you a copy of said hat as well. If you like.

Cheers,
Nick

[EDIT] Shall I add you to the permanent staff list?

Startrek91481 · 11-10-2006, 11:07 AM

the sidways version is scaled to fit on 8.5X11. I also updated the last one for you so if that one works better you know where to find it.

**nhall** · 11-10-2006, 11:25 AM

Thanks, mate. Would you like to be added to the permanent staff list?

Startrek91481 · 11-10-2006, 11:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nhall

Thanks, mate. Would you like to be added to the permanent staff list?

sure. btw if you have not already check the original posting of it. I think I may have improved it a bit

**nhall** · 11-11-2006, 01:32 AM

I like the improved version alot. In fact, that's the one I'll be using for the hat.

So here's the revised sequence of events

SURPISE ENDING A short bit of this flashes to the REAL WORLD - Aeryn living her life in a remote location. She frequently dreams about... HER CREATION AND TRAINING and is awakened by special-forces, who have arrived for AERYN'S CAPTURE.

When she is returned to Project Sabre's facilities, tested, and informed of the
SEQUENCE CRISIS, where her "Brothers and Sisters" have captured a weapon known as The Phoenix Sequence.

THE SEQUENCE EXPLAINED tells exactly what this new weapon is for, what it does, and how it works -- at that point the ATTACK ON BANK AND TRUST begins, and Aeryn's Brothers and Sisters take control of the hidden First Key. It is explained how it is known they have the first key, as money keeps randomly going missing from several key accounts, and is untraceable after being bounced off several thousand bank accounts.

AERYN'S BROTHER, SABRE 0001-P then recaptures her, and attempts to convince her to help in his plan. She has to think about it, and he disappears into the darkness. The Sabres attack the MAN WITH THE KEY, attempting to steal his Department of Defence Identification Card -- and his thumb (for thumbprint identification). Aeryn tracks her siblings, homing in on their position. She finds them, still refusing to allow them to destroy the Earth, and their BATTLE ENSUES. When Aeryn and her Brother are all that's left, and the two are talking, her Brother is shot by two PROJECT SABRE scientists, known as the "parents", who say they'll be taking control of The Sequence.

Aeryn informs them that they don't have the Third Key -- but learns that her original escape from Project Sabre was no accident -- rebellious tendencies had been identified in her, and before she escaped, she was implanted with the Third Key, an RFID Tag embedded into her skin. She was allowed to escape, and now, the Scientists have staged an "almost bloodless coup" on the entire world, while, at the same time, ridding themselves of their "horrid mistakes", the Sabre Children. They move to initiate the sequence, but.... SURPRISE ENDING...

I hope this is interesting enough....

And I'm thinking about having two Alternate Endings.... Thoughts on this, please?

Cheers,
Nick

**nhall** · 11-11-2006, 08:03 AM

Sorry to break the news, here, guys...

Defense is spelled wrong, mate. Can you fix that?

Cheers,
Nick

Startrek91481 · 11-11-2006, 04:38 PM

GRRR! AI spell checker missed that.

Aparently someone at Adobe can't spell or either my copy is fouled up. I'm going with Adobe can't spell.

I'd thought I'd spell checked it. I'm too poor of a speller not to.

Startrek91481 · 11-11-2006, 04:39 PM

I was wondering If I could get a year where this all starts? Because if it's present day I suggest useing current Military uniforms... I.E. BDUs, Class A and B's. Unit patches will still need to be designed either way. If you want I can make up the unit structure but If you already have that layed down i'll want that information.

**nhall** · 11-11-2006, 11:59 PM

Well, the ending of the film is supposed to be set in the year 2009, the year it's *hopefully* set for release. Aeryn and her siblings are... I think 22 years old at this time, meaning Project Sabre was initiated in 1987, the year I was born.

Didn't even think of that before!

Anyway, for their uniforms, I'm looking to get away from the traditional military look. They're designed to be Cold-War weapons, with the intent of attacking a target, without being able to tell which nation the attack came from.

Also, they carry katanas and two Desert Eagles, and I'm thinking something dark and somewhat flowing for their uniform.

NOTE: I can't get enough of the color combo Black and Red, but it's not a must.

Just an added bonus,

Cheers,
Nick

11-10-2006, 10:37 AM	#11 (permalink)
Startrek91481 SFM Nugget Join Date: May 2006 Location: Colorado Springs, Colorado Age: 26 Posts: 103 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	cool. I was not certain on the country but I thought it was probably the US. Any particular format you want size you want?
	"It's my estimation that every man ever got a statue made of him was one kind of a son of a b$#ch or another," Captain Malcolm Reynolds, "Firefly"

11-10-2006, 10:47 AM	#12 (permalink)
nhall Sabre Program Director Realname: Nicholas A. Hall Join Date: May 2006 Location: Korea Age: 21 Posts: 1,007 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	hmm. the format and size you posted will be fine. All I need is something to show the shopowner, who will then scan it into his machine, turning it into an embroidered patch or embroidering it directly onto my hat. Which, if you PM me some info, I can probably send you a copy of said hat as well. If you like. Cheers, Nick [EDIT] Shall I add you to the permanent staff list?
	Current 2D WIP: ''Wacom Nebula WIP'' "They say the best weapon is the one you never have to fire -- I respectfully disagree -- I think the best weapon is one you only have to fire... once" Last edited by nhall; 11-10-2006 at 10:58 AM.

11-10-2006, 11:25 AM	#14 (permalink)
nhall Sabre Program Director Realname: Nicholas A. Hall Join Date: May 2006 Location: Korea Age: 21 Posts: 1,007 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	Thanks, mate. Would you like to be added to the permanent staff list?
	Current 2D WIP: ''Wacom Nebula WIP'' "They say the best weapon is the one you never have to fire -- I respectfully disagree -- I think the best weapon is one you only have to fire... once"

11-11-2006, 01:32 AM	#16 (permalink)
nhall Sabre Program Director Realname: Nicholas A. Hall Join Date: May 2006 Location: Korea Age: 21 Posts: 1,007 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	I like the improved version alot. In fact, that's the one I'll be using for the hat. So here's the revised sequence of events SURPISE ENDING A short bit of this flashes to the REAL WORLD - Aeryn living her life in a remote location. She frequently dreams about... HER CREATION AND TRAINING and is awakened by special-forces, who have arrived for AERYN'S CAPTURE. When she is returned to Project Sabre's facilities, tested, and informed of the SEQUENCE CRISIS, where her "Brothers and Sisters" have captured a weapon known as The Phoenix Sequence. THE SEQUENCE EXPLAINED tells exactly what this new weapon is for, what it does, and how it works -- at that point the ATTACK ON BANK AND TRUST begins, and Aeryn's Brothers and Sisters take control of the hidden First Key. It is explained how it is known they have the first key, as money keeps randomly going missing from several key accounts, and is untraceable after being bounced off several thousand bank accounts. AERYN'S BROTHER, SABRE 0001-P then recaptures her, and attempts to convince her to help in his plan. She has to think about it, and he disappears into the darkness. The Sabres attack the MAN WITH THE KEY, attempting to steal his Department of Defence Identification Card -- and his thumb (for thumbprint identification). Aeryn tracks her siblings, homing in on their position. She finds them, still refusing to allow them to destroy the Earth, and their BATTLE ENSUES. When Aeryn and her Brother are all that's left, and the two are talking, her Brother is shot by two PROJECT SABRE scientists, known as the "parents", who say they'll be taking control of The Sequence. Aeryn informs them that they don't have the Third Key -- but learns that her original escape from Project Sabre was no accident -- rebellious tendencies had been identified in her, and before she escaped, she was implanted with the Third Key, an RFID Tag embedded into her skin. She was allowed to escape, and now, the Scientists have staged an "almost bloodless coup" on the entire world, while, at the same time, ridding themselves of their "horrid mistakes", the Sabre Children. They move to initiate the sequence, but.... SURPRISE ENDING... I hope this is interesting enough.... And I'm thinking about having two Alternate Endings.... Thoughts on this, please? Cheers, Nick
	Current 2D WIP: ''Wacom Nebula WIP'' "They say the best weapon is the one you never have to fire -- I respectfully disagree -- I think the best weapon is one you only have to fire... once" Last edited by nhall; 11-11-2006 at 01:37 AM.

11-11-2006, 08:03 AM	#17 (permalink)
nhall Sabre Program Director Realname: Nicholas A. Hall Join Date: May 2006 Location: Korea Age: 21 Posts: 1,007 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	Sorry to break the news, here, guys... Defense is spelled wrong, mate. Can you fix that? Cheers, Nick
	Current 2D WIP: ''Wacom Nebula WIP'' "They say the best weapon is the one you never have to fire -- I respectfully disagree -- I think the best weapon is one you only have to fire... once"

11-11-2006, 04:39 PM	#19 (permalink)
Startrek91481 SFM Nugget Join Date: May 2006 Location: Colorado Springs, Colorado Age: 26 Posts: 103 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	I was wondering If I could get a year where this all starts? Because if it's present day I suggest useing current Military uniforms... I.E. BDUs, Class A and B's. Unit patches will still need to be designed either way. If you want I can make up the unit structure but If you already have that layed down i'll want that information.
	"It's my estimation that every man ever got a statue made of him was one kind of a son of a b$#ch or another," Captain Malcolm Reynolds, "Firefly" Last edited by Startrek91481; 11-11-2006 at 04:42 PM.

11-11-2006, 11:59 PM	#20 (permalink)
nhall Sabre Program Director Realname: Nicholas A. Hall Join Date: May 2006 Location: Korea Age: 21 Posts: 1,007 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	Well, the ending of the film is supposed to be set in the year 2009, the year it's hopefully set for release. Aeryn and her siblings are... I think 22 years old at this time, meaning Project Sabre was initiated in 1987, the year I was born. Didn't even think of that before! Anyway, for their uniforms, I'm looking to get away from the traditional military look. They're designed to be Cold-War weapons, with the intent of attacking a target, without being able to tell which nation the attack came from. Also, they carry katanas and two Desert Eagles, and I'm thinking something dark and somewhat flowing for their uniform. NOTE: I can't get enough of the color combo Black and Red, but it's not a must. Just an added bonus, Cheers, Nick
	Current 2D WIP: ''Wacom Nebula WIP'' "They say the best weapon is the one you never have to fire -- I respectfully disagree -- I think the best weapon is one you only have to fire... once"

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