'Lil Help! -Abyss

[jadre]

Hey People,
I've started writing the attached episode (its in it's most basic form at the mo) and I can't seem to work out how to end the episode at the mo -I keep writing myself into a corner and cant seem to get out of it! lol

I usually write 'episodes' that are about ten or eleven (word) pages long, so I might make this a two parter...

If you've got any ideas about how I could get out of me wee corner, then it'll be much appreciated...

Dont be too evil with ur critisms please (this is a WIP!), please keep it constructive!

[Hellsgate]

Can you e-mail me the episode? I'll read it, upload it to my "New Worlds" anthology & further comment on it. What's the over-all synopsis of the episode?

If & when all else fails, set the self-destruct & assign final helm/flight-op's coordinates to the nearest available Sol-type sun in order to vaporize sensitive Starfleet information/technology, permanently preventing it from being salvaged & misused.

And/or ram the enemy with the tactical station's pre-set instructions applied to haul out & hit the enemy with everything it's got left right down to ejecting the nastiest substances from the toilets at them.

Get everyone to hit the escape pods, the Captain's yacht & hope like hell the enemy doesn't have a serious hard-on about wiping you off the face of the quadrant.

Your shuttle or escape pod is being hit harder than someone in the front row at a 1982 Van Halen concert....your character looses consciousness... Fade to black.....cliff-hangar.....

Resume cliffhangar later...in a Jem Hadar internment camp, Vorta genetics lab, or aboard a Section 31 vessel...or wherever. Or your character is revived from a stasis chamber & all hell has REALLY broken loose in the meantime...or has it really?