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Battlestar Andromeda, "Flight of the Colonies"
Published by Nadesico
11-07-2006
Battlestar Andromeda, "Flight of the Colonies"

Chapter 1
Battlestar Andromeda, Command Information Centre
Location: 5 Hours out Tauron


“Damage Control reports there are open fires on the starboard flight pods, emergency venting of Viper fuel is underway to keep the pod from detonating”, reported Office of the Watch, Captain Graham Kelly, sweat dripping down his brow.

“Main batteries Bravo through Delta on the starboard side have ceased function! We’re getting casualty reports all through the starboard section forward of Bracket 28! Multiple internal explosions”, Officer Brandson yelled out from behind the tactical station, its large operations screen partially obscured the tension on his face.

Battlestar Andromeda BSG-21, one of the first Mercury class Battlestars in service to the Colonial fleet, was in trouble. A number of Cylon basestars had executed an FTL jump right into her flight group and took them by surprise. The once mighty Battlestar was no worse off then her two Defender series escorts, bleeding vital oxygen into space as she traded punches with the worst enemies the Colonial fleet had ever known.

Commander Titanio was dead. Colonel Kyrah Broch wasted no time in assuming command of her ship.

Officer had once made jokes about Broch; she was unusually young to be an XO on a Battlestar, despite her excellent records at War College. As a result, she was often unsure of how to execute her role in administrating the daily operations of a Battlestar; however, that was not her field of expertise.

During her time war college, soldiers often mistook her small stature as a sign of weakness only to be unpleasantly surprised that she was far superior in hand to hand combat as well as tactical combat strategies.

Broch turned to her helmsman, a young man by the name of Ruhl, “Minus 180 degree Z axis rotation, keep the starboard flight pod from the line of fire”, she commanded.

The powerful warship performed a barrel roll exactly the way a million metric tonne object shouldn’t, its massive manoeuvring thrusters pushed against the invisible vacuum of space, exposing the underside of the proud vessel to its enemy.

“All portside batteries cease fire, reconfigure for salvo fire!” Broch ordered.

“Port side batteries report cease fire, reloading for salvo volley”, someone reported, Broch was too busy to check whom.

The DRADIS console screamed, a loud piercing siren penetrated through the commotion in Andromeda’s CIC, “Radiological alarm! The Basestar is launching nukes”, Kelly yelled, barely louder then the alarm itself, “Brace for Contact!”

Andromeda lurched, pitching the deck sharply to starboard. Crew were torn from their stations and the floor gave way under them, throwing them to the deck.

Broch recovered her position quickly, monitoring the DRADIS display again. The Cylon basestar was closing in on the nearly crippled vessel, its sister ship was keeping her distance as if daring Andromeda to chase after it.

“Helm, disengage main drive units, 1-4, 5, 7 and 8. Make it look like we’re drifting. Tactical, on the next ordinance impacts, cease fire on all portside flak batteries”

“Sir, we’ll be completely defenceless from the Basestar! We don’t even have any birds in the air to ward off the raiders!” Kelly reported with panic rising in his voice.

Broch snapped, “I’m well aware of what I’m doing Captain, carry out my orders!”

The Cylon basestar was moving in on the portside of the ship, blasting every target of opportunity it could find, its counterpart was continuing to bombard from a range. The DRADIS screen flickered as power spikes through the main distribution grid were beginning to affect critical systems.

Communications Officer Lieutenant Sarkov called out, “Incoming nukes! They’re launching the next wave. Brace for Contact!”

The ship lurched again, the impact softened by the apparently chaotic motion Andromeda’ helmsman was throwing her into, but no less devastating to the ship’s functions.

“Port flak batteries reporting cease fire”, Broch recognised the voice, it was crewman Tulley, a new military graduate in his first tour of duty.

He called out from behind the damage control station, its massive display partly concealing his image, “The basestar has closed to 2 clicks portside, they’re firing missiles right into our flight pod sir. The armour plating can’t take much more pounding!”

Broch smiled, the basestar made the move she anticipated, “All port rail batteries, target the central spire and FIRE at will”

Andromeda’s main weapons sprung to life as she tore into the unsuspecting basestar. By feigning weakness in the ship’s defences, the basestar had moved closer expecting to finish the ship off, it didn’t expect her commander to play possum. Shells detonated against the hull of the Cylon basestar, its large winglike form cracked in half as the Colonial weaponry split the vessel apart along its axis.

“The basestar is destroyed! Massive detonations reported”, Kelly shouted triumphantly.

The crew cheered at their victory, despite being surprised and outnumbered, they had managed to eliminate an enemy vessel. However, their exaltations did not last long, the ship shook from an impact, reminding them that another basestar was still engaging Andromeda.

The other cylon vessel was keeping clear of the Andromeda now, launching raiders and missiles from a distance, but keeping it from getting close enough to do any damage. Raiders swarmed over the Mercury class battlestar, it was hard to identify any single unit on her DRADIS due to the sheer volume of opposition.

“Helm, bring all engines online, Constant Bearing with the remaining basestar, all ahead flank”, Broch ordered.

If playing chicken with a car is considered unwise, then Andromeda playing chicken with a Cylon basestar is downright moronic. Andromeda turned, its bulbous head focused directly with the basestar as it powered towards its enemy. Andromeda would be roaring in anger if sound could travel through a vacuum, mighty engines tearing through the distance remaining between the two foes.

Missiles detonated along her hull, attempting to slow Andromeda’s advance, as well as raiders too unfortunate to get out of its path in time. Weapons all along her hull dispatched those raiders too distracted in the chaos to resume their attack.

“Three clicks to impact, all hands brace for collision!”

The Cylons blinked, the remaining basestar disappeared in a flash of light.

“The Cylons have retreated Colonel, the remaining raiders are attempting to escape at sublight speeds!” Kelly reported, with Colonel Broch in command, Kelly effectively acted as her XO during this crisis.

“All batteries concentrate fire on remaining Cylon raiders”, she ordered.

The large flat wing-like Cylon craft scattered and attempted to flee, with all the effectiveness of ants scurrying out of the path of a stampeding elephant. Andromeda’s batteries tore through the Cylon craft easily.

“Ok, that’s quite enough Colonel, I think you’ve done enough damage today”, Commander Titanio called out from behind one of the operations displays, “Lieutenant Sarkov, end simulation and return operations to standard”, his tall form cleared the displays he had been standing behind.

“All hands, stand down to Condition IV”, Sarkov called over the ship’s intercom. Almost immediately, the atmosphere on the bridge changed. Red lights illuminating battle ready stations were replaced with calm beige lights, air recirculators filtered out the smoke from the room.

“Dead people don’t give orders, sir”, Broch noted to her CO.

Commander Titanio was one of the most experienced commanders in the Colonial fleet, once on the short path to admiralty; his promotion was only stopped by the selection of another Battlestar commander in his stead. Nevertheless, he commanded with experience and wisdom.

Along with his imposing stature, Titanio had a soft face, almost fatherly as he issued instructions to those under his command. Many officers who had served with him for a long time, considered him as their mentor and teacher, rather then a commander.

Titanio turned to Lieutenant Sarkov, “Lieutenant, contact our escorts and thank them for their assistance in the combat exercises, request they return to formation”, he instructed.

“Colonel Broch that was a unique manoeuvre against the Cylon basestar. Lowering your defences in a time of combat”, Titanio commented.

“Thank you sir”

He scratched his stubble of a beard, “But you are aware that the Cylons aren’t as foolish as our computer systems make them out to be, don’t expect that tactic to work against real Cylons”

Broch turned away from the DRADIS station, her eyes met his with a fierce determination and a smirk, “Find me a real Cylon basestar and we’ll see, Commander”

Titanio chuckled, “You tell me where their homeworld is and I’ll ask them to take you on”, Broch smiled in reply.

Lieutenant Sarkov came forward from the main communications station with a note in her hand, she passed it to Titanio, “Sir, we just received this message from Tauron Space Yards, they’re requesting an ETA on our arrival”

Titanio accepted the note and gave it a quick read over, “Lieutenant, tell them we’ll be arriving within 6 hours. Forward them a copy of all our damage control and deck officer logs along with the results from our last battle simulation, with my compliments”

Sarkov nodded, after taking the note back from Titanio, she returned to the communications station.

Broch looked at Titanio, “My compliments, sir?” she asked.

“Andromeda is one of the last ships in the fleet not equipped with the Command Navigation Program because our systems are too old. Tauron Space Yard’s superintendent thinks that we’re unable to perform at peak efficiency. I expect that simulation report to change his tune”, Titanio replied.

“Aye sir. I should head below and start docking preparations”, Broch replied.

“Typically, that’s the XOs job, Colonel”, Titanio smiled, “You’ve got 5 hours”

Broch saluted her commanding officer, Titanio returned her salute before she turned and departed from the bridge. Andromeda’s bridge was almost identical to all her sister ships, large glass panes separated the CIC from the main corridors of the vessel, her emblem proudly emblazed on the doors. The large doors parted to release Broch from the CIC; she quickly made her way past the marines at the doorway and disappeared into the bustling crew activity in the halls outside.

“Commander”, Sarkov called out from her station, “We’re received a message from Colonial Fleet Command. The Colonial courier at Armistice Station hasn’t checked in, they’re requesting a report on all FTL capable ships in case someone needs to jump out retrieve the courier’s ship”

Titanio turned to Sarkov at the far end of the bridge, “I think we’re a little too busy today, Lieutenant”

“Yes sir, of course”, she replied.
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By nhall on 11-07-2006, 10:06 AM
Nice, but I don't think the Colonial courier message would be transmitted in the clear. The only reason a military broadcasts in the clear is in times of extreme emergency -- 9/11, and Pearl Harbor scramble messages were transmitted in the clear. That's where they got the idea in the miniseries.

Wonderfuly story, nonetheless.

Cheers,
Nick
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By Nadesico on 11-07-2006, 10:15 AM
You're right, i mixed it up with the disaster message (Fixed the chapter too).
This is only the first chapter in a continuing series. To know the fate of Andromeda and her crew in the fall, keep reading
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By Nadesico on 11-07-2006, 12:31 PM
Chapter 2 - Tauron Space Yards

Author's Note: Chapter 2 as promised.

Chapter 2
Battlestar Andromeda, Starboard Flight Deck
Location: 4 hours out of Tauron


“Alright people! Get these Vipers stripped; I want all of ‘em naked and ready for the wrench-monkeys on Tauron to play with as soon as we arrive!” ordered Deck Chief Lionel Henderson, “Make sure you check fuel tank integrity before you drain them, if I find one leak on the deck you’ll clean it up!”

Andromeda had four squadrons of Mark VII Vipers, the most advanced attack fighters available to the Colonial fleet. Their long narrow fine shape made them easy for manoeuvring in combat, but hell for maintenance and repair. Unfortunately for the Andromeda deck crew, Tauron’s engineering teams had specifically requested that all Vipers weapons be disarmed and their fuel drained before Andromeda reached the Space Yards.

With 80 Vipers and only an active deck crew of 50, Andromeda’s staff were working around the clock to ensure that the fighters and Raptors were ready for the engineering crews by the time the ship reached port. To make matters worse, half the Andromeda’s snipes were down with Sagittarion flu, meaning they were more shorthanded then usual, resulting in little sleep for those on duty.

“For a CAG, you’re taking this rather easy, D’anna”, Henderson noted, addressing the tall blonde woman behind him.

Major D’anna Facticius watched the deck crew scramble over her fighting force with a stoic demeanour, “If it has to be done, it has to be done Chief, I see no reason to be concerned with it”, she replied, “I am curious as to why you aren’t recalling the Alert fighters for overhaul preparations, however”

Henderson was taken aback, “You mean to tell me, that you want this ship to be deliberately undefended? We’d be defenceless if the Cylons attacked us right now”

“The Cylons have not been seen in 40 years, the worst we have to deal with is a handful of pirates and arms merchants running around in sub light shuttles, what kind of threat would they pose to Andromeda?”, D’anna scoffed, "Besides, the Defenders should be able to handle any opposition"

Henderson walked off towards the tool room, “It’s people like you that will get us all killed”

“You have no idea”, she whispered to herself.

Battlestar Andromeda, Engineering Level A, Utility Room A-6
Location: 3.5 Hours out of Tauron


“I wondered when you were going to turn up, Three”, Number Five said, concealed in the darkness of the utility room.

Three closed the door behind her, making sure that no-one had observed her entry into the darkened room, “Almost all their craft are down for repair, maybe 10 fighters left for defence. If Six has done her job right, even the Andromeda’s main weapons should be offline in time”

“If Six had done her job right in the first place, we wouldn’t have to resort to such draconian measures like planting bombs”, Five complained.

“There was no way for her to know that the humans wouldn’t install the program on all their ships. At least the ship will be immobilized when we begin”, Three replied.

Five sighed, scratching the back of his neck, “Alright, I’ll finish deploying the devices and meet you on Tauron station when we arrive”

Three looked down at the large case at Five’s feet. To anyone who saw it, it would appear to be a normal briefcase, but its contents are what make it unique.

“Make sure you plant a beacon as well”

“Why? It shouldn’t be necessary”

“You are remarkably short sighted, aren’t you?” Three sarcastically answered, “If the humans, no matter how remote a chance managed to defeat the measures we’ve put in place, we will want to find them afterwards”

“Alright, I’ll plant it in their engineering section. The radiation from the main drives should hide the transponder signal”, Five said, “You just make sure that their weapons are down by the time our friends arrive. And while you’re at it, take care of Commander Titanio too”

Five pushed the door open and left the room, leaving Three alone in the dark. She twirled her long blonde hair around her finger, deep in thought.

Battlestar Andromeda, Main Armoury
Location: 2 Hours out of Tauron


“Colonel, I don’t know what to tell you, we can’t have the starboard batteries disarmed in time for the dock”, Crewman Tyr said apologetically, “We don’t have anywhere to store the ordinance”

“What happened? How did you manage to get the armoury blast doors to seal?” Kryah Borch demanded, “The ship is supposed to have a manual override for the doors. Have you contacted CIC?”

Tyr shifted his feet, obviously uneasy, “We tried sir. CIC reports they lost control of the armoury overrides earlier this morning. Some sort of computer malfunction, we’ve been trying to gain access through the ventilation ducts, but they’re too small for any one person to squeeze through”

“So get a plasma torch and cut the doors open”, Broch suggested, tapping the large bulkhead softly with her hand.

“Sir, that’s 6 inches of reinforced titanium and steel, a plasma torch would take nearly a day to cut through”, Tyr stated, “the damnest thing, the door is acting as if it were welded shut from the inside, but that’s not possible”

Colonel Broch ordered, “Alright, well get a cutting team down here, get a marine if you have to, we’re going to need that door open eventually”

Crewman Tyr scurried off to locate the necessary equipment, Colonel Broch sighed and resumed her checklist of tasks to complete. With time running out for her to complete her task, and what seemed like a million items she had to sign off on, she started wandering off down the corridors when the intercom buzzed.

“XO, contact CIC. XO, contact CIC”, Sarkov’s voice came through over the intercom.

Broch hurried to the nearest phone, she picked up the receiver and spoke, “CIC, XO”

“Colonel, Tauron station is requesting an update on our progress. They want a status report on the procedures we have completed and a complete inventory of our ordinance and fighter compliment”, Sarkov reported.

“Shouldn’t the Commander be taking care of this?” Broch asked.

“Yes Sir, but he’s in conference with Admiral Landstrom at Picon Fleet Headquarters and cannot be disturbed at the moment”, came the reply.

“Contact the CAG and Master-at-Arms, have them prepare their respective reports, I don’t have the time to write another report right now”

“Aye Sir. Medical is also requesting information on Tauron Station’s current medical capacities and how soon we can unload the ill staff to the station infirmary”

Broch sighed; it’s going to be a long day.

Battlestar Andromeda, CIC
Location: Tauron Space Yards


“Entering flight pattern sir”, Kelly reported, “DRADIS shows our flight path is clear”

“We’re receiving a message from Tauron Yards Operations Centre”, Sarkov reported.

Titanio answered, “Put them on speakers, Lieutenant”

The CIC was relatively empty; many of the crew had left the room to secure the ship for docking manoeuvres. The Tauron LSO’s voice came through loud and clearly.

“Andromeda, Tauron Flight Control. You are cleared for docking manoeuvres at Spaceframe Seven. Approach velocity at 100kph, please confirm”

Commander Titanio picked up the phone in front of his display, “Tauron Flight Control, Andromeda Actual. Acknowledge receipt of message, will adjust speed and course”

He turned to helmsman Ruhl, “Helm, make your course for Spaceframe Seven, all ahead slow, 100kph”

“Aye Sir”

The Andromeda slowed its approach to the massive space station. It was a way station in space, massive beacons blared across the enormous structure that dwarfed even the mighty Andromeda herself. Massive space docks spanned kilometres of space, stretching from the centre of the space station itself like a spider web across a doorway.

Throughout the station, Colonial vessels of all shapes and sized lay dormant, crews rushing along their hulls in EVA gear, performing repairs or installing equipment to various ships. Around the station, dozens of small craft, Raptors and service machinery scurried about, transporting people and goods throughout the facility. One couldn’t help but imagine the Space Yard as a bee hive, with thousands of drones swarming it.

“Colonel Broch”, he addressed, “Make sure the Tauron teams are fully briefed and prepared, I want to be back in space in 36 hours at the longest. Each shore party gets 12 hours”

“Yes sir”, Broch replied, “Commander, will you away with the first shore party?” she asked.

Commander Titanio frowned, “Well I believe I’m supposed to be in conferences for the rest of the day, Colonel. I won’t be able to enjoy any shore leave, or anything beyond the Galley’s offerings. But you go enjoy yourself”, he replied, going back to his work.

Colonel Broch looked at the pile of communications and systems reports stacked on the combat information table before her, Commander Titanio had been working on reports for Picon Headquarters all week, and now he was asked to manufacture more for a meeting later today.

Curiosity had gotten the better of Broch, but a few discreet inquiries had revealed nothing of value. Kyrah was concerned that Titanio may have been investigation for some reason or another, but for the life of her, she couldn’t identify what.

“I think I’ll stay aboard ship, sir. If you’re busy with your conferences, you’ll need someone to run the ship”, she replied with a smile.

“That’s alright commander, Captain Kelly can handle the ship, I know how awkward you are with battlestar operations, I think a break would do you well”, Titanio replied.

Broch shook her head, “All the more reason to get hands on experience sir”, she returned.

The conversation had distracted both officers from the matters at hand; neither of them noticed when Captain Kelly had joined them in the centre of CIC.

“Sir, we’re 2000 metres from Spaceframe 7”, he said.

Titanio turned to Kelly, “Thank you Captain”, he looked back to the DRADIS display for an update, “Helm, come right 15 degrees, engines slow to 35kph”

“Aye sir, engines answering, 35kph”

Andromeda approached the docking frame, it’s large framed pylons extended down like a claw ready to grasp anything foolish enough to fly into it. The Battlestar slowly edged its way through the opening of the Spaceframe, as if returning to a lover’s embrace.

“Helm, main engines full stop. Manoeuvring jets to station keeping, bring us to a hard seal”, Titanio ordered.

Andromeda nudged its way to the docking column as helmsman Ruhl expertly applied the manoeuvring jets to adjust her trajectory. As gently as one could expert from two hard objects approaching each other, Andromeda’s magnetic clamps locked onto the docking column and drew it into place. With a soft thud, the magnetic clamps created an airtight seal around the ship’s hull.

Crewman Tulley called out from the rear of the centre, “We have a hard seal sir. Docking collar is locked”

Titanio picked up the phone on the situation panel, “Put me on speaker”, he ordered Lieutenant Sarkov.

She pressed a few buttons and the intercom crackled to life.

“This is Commander Titanio; we have achieved a hard seal with Tauron Station. Shore Parties are to depart as instructed. All sections coordinate with Tauron Operations as instructed. Enjoy your leave, it’s the last you’ll be getting for a while”, Titanio said over the intercom.

“Colonel, if you’re sticking around, you can see to our Medical situation, get an inoculation schedule set up for the crew. We don’t need this becoming an epidemic on ship during the next tour”, Titanio ordered.

“Aye, Aye”
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By Endeavour on 11-08-2006, 11:14 PM
I look forward to more. This is quite interesting.
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By ven1ce on 11-30-2006, 07:50 PM
I am also looking forward to reading a lot more about the Andromeda here
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By Unreal on 12-19-2006, 01:13 PM
I agree with Ven Ice and Endeavor - this is a good story so far.
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By Nadesico on 12-20-2006, 12:27 AM
it'll continue in a bit, christmas time and all makes it hard for me to get any fun stuff done
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