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Race for Atlantis (Dark Frontier: A Star Trek Series)
Published by slimdim
11-28-2006
Post Race for Atlantis (Dark Frontier: A Star Trek Series)

A new ship, a new crew, a new captain, but an adventure older than time…
When Plato wrote of the lost city of Atlantis he could never imagine the scope of what he had uncovered.
The discovery of an ancient alien colony in the Earth’s Antarctic plunges the crew of the USS Ithaca into the adventure of a lifetime.
With both the Borg and Romulans in the running for this ancient civilization the, race is on to find Atlantis and uncover its secrets. But things have been set in motion that unless stopped will bring the Galaxy to its knees.
The Clock is ticking and time is running out for the Ithaca and her crew.

Cover image is done by me Slim_Dim. Ships used in the cover image were maid by me (again). Faces were maid done using SIMS2 Face editor.

Star Trek ect is owned by Paramount All original characters are the property of Slim Dim (me). Any resemblance of the charters to any persons living or dead is either coincidental or intentional (You know who you are).

For full story pleas see attached document.

All Comments criticism (preferably constructive) welcomed... Except "I hate your steaming pile of **** I didn't even read past the first chapter and it’s crap" Before you asked I have actually had this as a response to an earlier incarnation of this story.
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By Sanderlee on 11-29-2006, 03:32 AM
Two quick notes ... as I've not had time to read more than just a couple of pages.

1) Spell-checking and grammar checking.
There are numerous errors as early as the first quotation by Phlox (hunanoid, srot, etc.). I'm going to assume there are grammatical errors as well ... if you caught one you'd have caught the other.

2) Format.
I can only assume this was written in Word. As such, indenting the paragraphs, etc. is kind of essential. Now, it is possible that your .pdf converter removes that formating. But that would shock me ... since it lets you center justify and add clip art.

I DO love the initial quotation ... it intrigues me quite a bit. I'm planning on reading the story in depth in the next few days (three papers, one film review, 200 pages of Japanese history and a Powerpoint presentation all due in the next six days ... oy!).

Sanderlee.
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