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By
Sanderlee
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11-29-2006, 03:32 AM
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| Two quick notes ... as I've not had time to read more than just a couple of pages. 1) Spell-checking and grammar checking. There are numerous errors as early as the first quotation by Phlox (hunanoid, srot, etc.). I'm going to assume there are grammatical errors as well ... if you caught one you'd have caught the other. 2) Format. I can only assume this was written in Word. As such, indenting the paragraphs, etc. is kind of essential. Now, it is possible that your .pdf converter removes that formating. But that would shock me ... since it lets you center justify and add clip art. I DO love the initial quotation ... it intrigues me quite a bit. I'm planning on reading the story in depth in the next few days (three papers, one film review, 200 pages of Japanese history and a Powerpoint presentation all due in the next six days ... oy!). Sanderlee. |