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uniderth SFM Guru Realname: Mike Join Date: May 2006 Location: Earth.... I think Age: 24 Posts: 714 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	Earth-Romulan War Chapter One - Confessions at Icarus Captain James Kirk strode down the corridor on his way to the briefing room. He had a lot on his mind. Only a few hours ago he had barely defeated a Romulan ship. In fact, it was the first Romulan ship seen by humans in over one hundred years. It... Click here to read the entire article
	Lewis and Clark(Star Trek), Bonaventure 102 81 NCC, Star Trek: Animated Series Remake, Eugenics Wars 2D Last edited by uniderth; 02-03-2007 at 11:32 PM.

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By Mr. Wilde on 06-01-2006, 01:34 PM

Nice work! Keep it up!

I just don't know about this line of Spock though:

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“As I said earlier,” stated Spock matter-of-factly, “I did that to save a highly skilled navigator, nothing more.”

I just think it sounds strange, even for a Vulcan. Spock would have saved anyone in a dangerous situation, no matter if it's a navigator or a street junkie, at least that my impression.

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By uniderth on 06-10-2006, 07:20 AM

EDIT: See main story for this chapter

Last edited by uniderth; 07-07-2006 at 07:00 AM.

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By uniderth on 06-10-2006, 07:22 AM

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Originally Posted by Mr. Wilde

Nice work! Keep it up!

I just don't know about this line of Spock though:

I just think it sounds strange, even for a Vulcan. Spock would have saved anyone in a dangerous situation, no matter if it's a navigator or a street junkie, at least that my impression.

Actually that line came from the episode Balance of Terror.

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By daniel evans on 06-10-2006, 07:55 AM

just read the last of story, talk about suspense!!!

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By Freak on 06-12-2006, 03:51 PM

The latest part to the story was good. I liked the tip of the hat to the TNG ep Gambit. Look forward to the next part.

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By uniderth on 06-13-2006, 10:35 AM

EDIT: See main story for this chapter.

Last edited by uniderth; 07-07-2006 at 07:01 AM.

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By daniel evans on 06-13-2006, 10:42 AM

few speling errors, 'ad' should be 'and' in second line, just an example.

sick so far, nice battle scene coming up?

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By uniderth on 06-13-2006, 10:45 AM

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Originally Posted by daniel evans

few speling errors, 'ad' should be 'and' in second line, just an example.

sick so far, nice battle scene coming up?

Just tell me the spelling errors and I'll edit it.

Yes there is a nice battle scene coming up. I'm listening to Star Wars and LOTR music to give me inspiration for this battle scene.

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By Freak on 06-13-2006, 10:48 AM

nice but you can't stop there! you have to give more!
I want MORE DAM IT!!

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By uniderth on 06-13-2006, 11:01 AM

Sorry but i have to do it this way to keep you guys in suspense.

I just cant believe how many refernces to other Star Trek episodes I've been able to put in just this beginning part. If you go and watch the TOS episodes, Balance of Terror and Savage Curtain you be able to pick out alot of it.

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