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uniderth SFM Guru Realname: Mike Join Date: May 2006 Location: Earth.... I think Age: 24 Posts: 714 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	Earth-Romulan War Chapter One - Confessions at Icarus Captain James Kirk strode down the corridor on his way to the briefing room. He had a lot on his mind. Only a few hours ago he had barely defeated a Romulan ship. In fact, it was the first Romulan ship seen by humans in over one hundred years. It... Click here to read the entire article
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By aben06 on 06-13-2006, 11:25 AM

Great Start

Hi Uniderth

Just discovered this and now I have to fix my socks up after you blew them off with this effort . LOL .
Now I'm left hanging for more like everybody else . Can't wait .

Cheers

aben06

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By UnWantedSoldier on 06-13-2006, 12:26 PM

Great work Uniderth. I can’t wait to read more. Keep up the good work

Just one thing, I noticed in the last couple of additions you used “Vulcanis”

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Originally Posted by uniderth

Surak shut off the view screen. This was the closest he had been to feeling rage in a long time. But even after witnessing this atrocity he remained emotionless. War was not the new Vulcanian way, but if they did not act soon they would all be dead and then there would be no new Vulcanis. Surak turned around, clasped his hands behind his back and walked out the door into the corridor.

Is that a correct spelling or is it suppose to be vulcanians?

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By uniderth on 06-13-2006, 05:30 PM

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Originally Posted by UnWantedSoldier

Great work Uniderth. I can’t wait to read more. Keep up the good work

Just one thing, I noticed in the last couple of additions you used “Vulcanis”

Is that a correct spelling or is it suppose to be vulcanians?

Well your right I did use Vulcanis. I guess I should be more specific. Vulcanis is the planet. Vulcanians are the people.

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By UnWantedSoldier on 06-14-2006, 01:15 AM

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Originally Posted by uniderth

Well your right I did use Vulcanis. I guess I should be more specific. Vulcanis is the planet. Vulcanians are the people.

Ah alrighty, Thx for clearing that up. Again great work can't wait to read more.

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By uniderth on 06-24-2006, 05:24 AM

EDIT: See main story for this chapter.

Last edited by uniderth; 07-07-2006 at 06:56 AM.

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By uniderth on 06-30-2006, 10:50 AM

Ok I added some more to the last part. I'm not sure anybody read it so I just added to the previous post. So If you did read it last time and want top read the new stuff just re-read that previous post.

Please be sure to include useful comments. Do I need to change anything? Did it go to fast? to slow?

Soon it will be Stiles' turn to tell his part of the story. Oops spoiler!

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By uniderth on 07-07-2006, 07:05 AM

OKAY!!! Well I finished Chapter One! I compiled all the posts of chapter one into the main thing. There are a few more paragraphs on the end of it that you might want to read.

See main article

Last edited by uniderth; 02-03-2007 at 11:33 PM.

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By daniel evans on 07-07-2006, 11:31 AM

just read the latest addition to you story. it is great!!!!! there are a few minor errors i found, but unfortunately i do not have the time at the moment to point them all out...sorry!!!

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By uniderth on 08-28-2006, 02:14 PM

OK a little bit more

See main article.

Last edited by uniderth; 02-03-2007 at 11:34 PM.

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By uniderth on 08-29-2006, 05:07 AM

Ok I added the missing part.

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