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ghall
SFM Nugget
Registered: February 2007 Posts: 104
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Tue April 10, 2007 6:23am
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Rating: 6.00
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I'm not sure if your image has too much, or some elements (such as the Klingon cruiser) are just unclear. Otherwise it's very good. The lighting seems appropriate for a giant ion storm.
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EricJ56
SFM Nugget
Registered: October 2006 Posts: 7
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Wed April 11, 2007 9:29am
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No the storm hides the upper left. At first I couldn't tell what it was until I read your post. If maybe you overlay the Enterprise and Klingon (that is the subject matter yes?) over the storm, rather than under it, it'd be easier to pick out.
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EricJ56
SFM Nugget
Registered: October 2006 Posts: 7
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Wed April 11, 2007 9:31am
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Rating: 3.00
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Plus the lighting is good...
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Hundred
SFM Guru
Registered: May 2006 Location: Houston Posts: 769
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Wed April 11, 2007 12:03pm
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Rating: 9.00
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Very nice, though the Klingon ship is very obscured. Good job.
If you added a few stars in some key locations, (for one behind the Klingon ship) like "breaks" in the storm, it would probably show them (the ships) up more. Maybe you can have bolt hitting one of the ships. (comment added 08/12/07)
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Kgoku28
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2006 Location: Multiverse. Posts: 66
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Thu April 12, 2007 1:25pm
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Rating: 9.00
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It's a really image Freak.
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Cafe 5
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2006 Posts: 3
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Fri April 13, 2007 9:53pm
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Rating: 9.00
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It's a great visual. Love the lighting.
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Freak
Project Lead on SFM Film
Registered: May 2006 Location: London, UK Posts: 7,762
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Mon April 16, 2007 7:22am
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The are two energy Ribbons, one in front of the camera and another behind the Ent, this is why it hard to see the Klingon ship and the stars. Thanks for all your comments.
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LD
SFM Nugget
Registered: June 2006 Posts: 11
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Sun May 13, 2007 4:36pm
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Rating: 6.00
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A good try, but on the messy and scattered side. There lacks a strong focus for the eye. Unfortunately, the purple colour palette dull the overall image, due more to the purple/black contrast more than anything else. A brighter hue and maybe a different lighting scheme could improve things drastically!
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GuitarEC
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2006 Posts: 33
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Tue July 17, 2007 12:29pm
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Good work overall, but the credits are not correct.
I believe you are using Eric Peterson's Refit Enterprise mesh (not Dennis Bailey's) - converted to Blender format by Rashid Al-Marri - with revisions by Eric M. Clark (per the source's website).
Not trying to come across as a nit-picker, but we should make sure we give proper credit to those who deserve it.
Eric "GuitarEC" Clark (yea, THAT Eric Clark)
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Clay
Deep Space Researcher
Registered: May 2006 Location: Maysville / Morehead, KY, US Posts: 1,398
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In the future please report credit discrepancies to the gallery administrators: Myself, Spry, or Dac
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