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Andrew
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2006 Location: England Posts: 9
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Thu October 4, 2007 12:37am
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The nacelles of the main ship are a bit 'red', maybe they could have some slight colour/brightness variation. Also, a touch of glow here and there wouldn't be bad, and maybe even a touch of blur on the Starbase in the background and the pod in the foreground to create the illusion of depth-of-field.
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DaveWh
SFM Nugget
Registered: August 2006 Location: Seattle WA USA Posts: 94
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Thu October 4, 2007 7:11am
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Nice composition. Nice lighting. The drydock is loaded with render errors. I found 16 before I stopped looking. Overlapping polygons, mostly.
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temporalRiff
SFM Nugget
Registered: June 2006 Posts: 1
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Thu October 4, 2007 9:26am
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Overall, I like the ship design, but the curve to the forward axis of the warp drive struts bothers me.
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kenny
SFM Oracle
Registered: June 2006 Location: Erith in Kent - GB. 13th Tribe Of Kobol. Posts: 3,023
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Fri October 5, 2007 11:06am
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Rating: 10.00
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Brilliant,
very nice look at the ship and drydock.
To me it looks a smooth, and calm touch to the new on look for the Federation Of Planets.
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Cafe 5
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2006 Posts: 3
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Sat October 6, 2007 2:02pm
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Rating: 10.00
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Its a nice shot. Pleasing to the eye.
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Animaniac
Austria´s SFM-Maniac
Registered: May 2006 Location: Vienna/Austria Posts: 1,026
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Sun October 7, 2007 9:03am
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@DaveWh: The Drydock is not my Mesh, i have it used how it is from the Creator, i know there are many bad Polygons, maybe i make a own in the Future.
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Kgoku28
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2006 Location: Multiverse. Posts: 66
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Tue October 9, 2007 2:03pm
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Rating: 10.00
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Really image Animaniac.
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ulimann644
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2008 Location: Vienna - Austria Posts: 17
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Tue June 10, 2008 9:51am
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Rating: 9.00
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very good
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