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Kgoku28
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2006
Location: Multiverse.
Posts: 66
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Tue May 6, 2008 1:42pm
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Rating: 10.00
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Great job on the Narn Cruisers.
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Grzesiek
SFM Guru
Registered: May 2006
Location: Canada/Poland
Posts: 349
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Tue May 6, 2008 9:20pm
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Rating: 10.00
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Very nice work. Ahh, the Narn. Miss those guys.
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Halo Buff
SFM Nugget
Registered: June 2006
Posts: 40
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Where are they from...that's not one I know.
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Thunderchild
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2006
Location: Green heart of Germany
Posts: 40
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Sun May 11, 2008 3:16pm
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Rating: 8.00
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Halo: they're Narn Cruisers from the Babylon 5 universe, G'Quon class - Hot Rods in space if you will.
The composition is nice. However, the key light is waay off. The sun from behind should highlight the edges, but the cruisers are quite overexposed from above. OTOH, the fog shadows of the asteroids are well done.
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ulimann644
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2008
Location: Vienna - Austria
Posts: 17
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Hi all
thunderchild: you have announced it well to Halo Buff 
I know that the illumination of the cruisers is not correct, because the sun on the background-pic is not the Light-Source.
My intention by creating this bright scene was not to create another dark-blue-illuminated-scene, like hundreds before...
The asteroids are well done by T. Pyle ( see credits )
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Coolhand
Building better worlds
Registered: May 2006
Posts: 2,510
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Nice to see the Narns again, always liked those ships. I hear you about wanting a bright pic but you really need to set up your lighting to match the background. ok you could have another sun which is way up & out of shot, but all the elements in the backdrop show lighting that is consistent with the sun thats visible in the background, and aren't lit in a way to suggest that theres another light source, it would look much better if it matched.
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ulimann644
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2008
Location: Vienna - Austria
Posts: 17
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Ok - Now I´m ready with reworking the "Narn-Patrol" Primary I´ve fixed the illumination of the scene. Also I´ve changed the camera-angle a little bit. Hope you like it more than the first try... 
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dark-phoenix
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2006
Location: Germany/NRW/Bonn
Posts: 57
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Mon June 16, 2008 9:23am
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Rating: 1.00
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wrong lightning
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ulimann644
SFM Nugget
Registered: May 2008
Location: Vienna - Austria
Posts: 17
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Mon June 16, 2008 12:00pm
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@dark-phoenix: What you say?? Lightning... like Thunder and Lightning... WOAHA HA HA HA...  Think you mean lighting or illumination...
Did you ever thought about to go to an ophthalmologist???
P.S. This version of the scene HAS the RIGHT lighting ´cause the lightsource at the pic IS NOW the lightsource of the scene - see also the haze-shadows... 
P.P.S. The comments above yours means the first version of it, that I´ve canceled...
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